Today we also wrote two poems in large groups. Each person was asked to come up with two words only, whilst looking at a tree. Everyone had a different perspective on it: One pupil was wearing a blindfold and was touching the trunk; another had a magnifying glass and looked closely at the trunk and branches; another was looking through a kitchen roll tube from a distance; two pupils had framed mirrors and were lying on the ground looking at the branches above through the mirrors. The rest found their own space and looked at the tree from that perspective.
We wrote each word on a post-it note and then as a group, decided how to put the words together to make a poem. Read these to see what you think:
Scots Pine
A cooperative poem by primary six
The tall, colourful, rough tree
Is mighty and gimungous.
It is furry and soft.
Intertwining branches are bumpy.
The almighty tree is scratched and scary.
Spiky,
Scratching,
Reaching,
Collosal.
Scots Pine
A cooperative poem by primary seven
Mossy and straight
thin and tall
sticky and sharp
enormous, gigantic.
Jagged and rough
uneven and sparse
hard and pointy.
Fantastic, fat branches
home for insects.
Full and branchy
A sprouting giant.